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Voices
by Jade L.
copyright 06-19-2008


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Ever hear the voice in your head
telling you what to do?
What to prove before you're dead
That's God talking to you.

Ever feel the force stopping you
forcing you to do the wrong thing again and again?
Those horrible chains of happiness.
It laughs, that's Satan.

Here's a file
get yourself free.
Break out of denial.
Help you then help me.




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11-10-2008 Elise R.    

The way you showed how God is like your good voice in your head was incredible! I loved it! It really shows your knowledge of the Lord. I liked the way you showed good verses evil and how good will always win. Keep it up!
09-18-2008 Jade L.    

Visitor Reads: 62
Total Reads: 101
Comments: 8

I left a lot of poems in the workshop too long. I'm not writing too much as all I do is sleep and go to school.
09-15-2008 Nivedita R.    

Oh wow!! I never thought of good and evil like that...it's very different! I like how you connect the word 'laugh' with 'Satan.' It fits together very much like a black jigsaw puzzle! Good job - I need to read more of your poems!
07-03-2008 June Nazarian    

Hi Jade - This is an excellent piece on the struggle between good and evil. Your second stanza, which speaks of wrong things as being chains of happiness, was a thought to ponder. Bad, happy things, I do believe, always cause unhappiness in the long run. Nice job....June
06-24-2008 Chermayn Fong    

Whoa! Great angle right there! I haven't read those kinds of poems for a long time! It's really good. I'm going to check out your other poems now. Keep it up!
06-20-2008 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Another good piece from you! This again talks about what happens inside our minds. The struggle with good verses evil. I believe you have found a way to battle this and writing your feelings will help others. Great job, Anthony
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