07-15-2011
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 648
Total Reads: 700
Comments: 14
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02-24-2011
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 548
Total Reads: 600
Comments: 13
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11-20-2009
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 349
Total Reads: 400
Comments: 12
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10-20-2009
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Hmm, I'm quite impressed by this piece. I can agree with the mentioned grievance and frustration mentioned in the second paragraph, along with the hint at becoming disgusted with people who dramatically cry about all their problems, talk about suicide, but just wait for the number of page views to raise.
Good work on this piece; the unique topic and mood was very interesting.
Leigh of the Commenting Community
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06-09-2009
Jade Luke
Wrong. I hate it when people comment on some imaginary poem. Seriously what the heck are they reading?
Visitor Reads: 256
Total Reads: 303
Comments: 10
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02-26-2009
Kimberly Angelone
Why are you on a poetry site if you have an attitude about everything? If you can't take constructive criticism, you need to visit some of the other sites if you don't want to be critiqued. you have a great talent - i am drawn to this one.
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01-27-2009
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 159
Total Reads: 200
Comments: 8
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09-04-2008
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Impressive poem. The beginning was very thoughtful and pleasant the picture. The second part I could relate to though, because I joined DeviantART this last summer and one girl I decided to put on my watch list because she was supposed to send me some music, posts whiny journal updates a few times a day. >.> The most recent one was particularly like the situation you described here.
I more or less lost respect for her when she went from sullen saying her cousin was missing then to bouncy-cheerful-fangirl a few paragraphs later.
All in all, very nice piece. :) I'd say more but I'm being poked off the PC to go to the grocery store. *sweat drop*
Leigh regaining her post in the Commenting Community
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06-21-2008
Jade Luke
Well duh. I know it takes guts, but it is still stupid. Not everyone can change their lives. They can only change how they act. oh and the "Love and kisses" thing creeps me out.
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06-20-2008
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
People tend to read things the way they want and get only what they desire or not. Most don't try to see the meanings the writer may have had and some could not find it with a map. People are shallow for the most part and only really think of themselves. killing yourself actually takes more guts than you think and most try it for attention without really wanting the obvious outcome. I have read many things on the net about killing ones self, but my answer is always the same...if you don't like your life....change it! Only the person living the life can change it. It's not easy, but it can and has been done. I wish everyone happiness, but realize that it's not my choice! Good write to make one think. Love and kisses, Anthony
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