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More Time
by Mike Gallimore (Age: 58)
copyright 05-16-2008


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I'd like to go dancing
on a beach in the moonlight --
it would be a such a fine night
in our memories stored.

And I'd like to go sailing;
cross an ocean of deep blue --
we would make such a fine crew,
we'd take no cares aboard.

I'd like to have more time
to tell you I love you --
to make sure that you knew
you're the one I adored.

But time is the one thing
we seem to be short of --
life seems to be sort of
funny that way.

Still, I'd like to keep living
in the house where we grew old --
despite all we've been told
I'd like one more day.

I'd like to go dancing
with you in the moonlight --
I'd cling to you so tight
and I'd never let go.


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05-19-2008 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

This left me with one of those feelings you get when you are watching a movie and you want to shout out to the actor/actress but sit there in silence, mouth agape, knot in your throught, and watch on as the story unfolds in complete suspense... and in this case, with a tear in my eye.

You say so much with so little... and yet, any more would be too much. As Goldilocks would say, "This one is juuuuuust right!"
05-19-2008 June Nazarian    

This one put a lump in my throat. You have beautifully captured the emotions felt as we grow older. Those who have a lifetime of wonderful memories are the fortunate ones. I've noticed this theme of continued love in others of your works, and it's quite touching....June
05-17-2008 Frank Fields    

I just noticed the age rating. It could easily be lowered to 10, Mike. I think there are some 12 year old writers and younger that would appreciate this work. Right now, they're deprived of this fine piece. Your choice, of course. ^^

Frank :)
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05-17-2008 Frank Fields    

Some poets can say so much with so few words.

Others seem to take an eternity, when sharing their life.

I'll not argue the one against the other, but this one has a very gentle touch, a softness that would be damaged if presented any other way.

Very good writing, Mike! ^^

Frank :)
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05-16-2008 Jade L.    

Ooh this is a nice, but sad poem. Although I can usually do without romance, I actually like this one. You seem to enjoy the ocean. The quiet peaceful seclusion.
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