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Excellent collection of Haiku, I studied Haiku writing for six months in Tokyo.
IMHO you have captured the spirit of Haiku and Zen in this wonderfully written collection.
Thanks for these,
You BET it's hard work! I was at my wits end with my poem "Diamonds: Reflections Of Haiku" at http://www.prose-n-poetry.com/display_work/812
(which was also a string of Haiku).
Technical thought...
hot august should be capitalized, no?
And I'd be hard pressed to pick a favorite stanza, though this one keeps repeating my mind and making me smile over and over again...
College Days!
moon by my pillow
a half-written poem pencilled out--
but school comes early!
I really like the visuals you create, the phrases you use, and the images they evoke.
What a lovely set of Haiku, one of my favorite forms. Love things short and to the point, and especially enjoy the last line of Haiku which gives it its punch. I actually counted all your syllables, You strayed only once, lol. Thanks for a most pleasant read........June
What can I say? This is a beautiful weaving of a
tapestry of life, cycling through a day. The visions, the sounds, the memories, and so much more--all found a favorable reception in my company.
You did yourself proud with these haiku and gave us some of that pride as gift.
Welcome !
