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Spinning Spiders, II--A Haiku
by Frank Fields
copyright 08-28-2008


Age Rating: 4 to 127

  Spinning Spiders, II--A Haiku
Picture Credits: http://s8.photobucket.com/albums/a38/Mekelhorn

for Mike Gallimore, with thanks

Crickets chirp all night
Spiders spin their silky webs
Moths seek dusty moons


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08-29-2008 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

very nice. I like the complex simplicity of this. You can read the lines or between them. I grew up on a farm and the spiders really liked the barn! Great job, Anthony
08-29-2008 Mike Gallimore    

I am honored, master. Thank you.
08-28-2008 Raja Sharma    

Crickets chirp all night
Spiders spin their silky webs
Moths seek dusty moons

I found strange , if I may call it, action cohesion in these three beautiful lines. Alliteration is always your mark of intelligence.
First line:Sound effect
Second line:Physical action
Third line:Mental activity

The presence of these nocturnal creatures with their unique abilities in their respective fields has given a new dimension to the poem.
It is highly illustrious, laconic yet eloquent.
Wonderful
Bless you
Rajasir
08-28-2008 Brooke M.    

How simplistic and pretty. I like hauikus...(did I spell this right?) I especially love the last little sentence..."Moths seek dusty moons." It makes you wonder...is it the moon? Dusty bulbs of outside night lights. I'm guessing its the latter. Very nice one, Frank! Keep it up!
08-28-2008 Jeanette Broussard    

The sylable count is perfect. I love the wording and it was a easy to read poem. The only like I was not to sure of was the last one. Dusty seemed to throw me off. I'm not wuite sure what you are trying to convey with that line. However I enjoyed the poem and it may just be me not getting it. Keep up the great work. Thanks, Jeanette
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