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Titles --My Thoughts

by Frank Fields
copyright 08-29-2008


Age Rating: 7 +

One of the most difficult parts of any work, that I have a problem with, is finding an appropriate as well as an interesting title.

The title is the very first thing a reader will see. The writer might want to give the reader some kind of "preview." If I can make the title interesting enough, the reader will hopefully become interested in the writing.

Another consideration of mine is the relevancy of the title to the work. Even if it's only one word long, does the title give enough information about the content? Especially in terms of its accuracy? If a work is written about the Sun and Moon, should it have a title that alludes to roses? Probably not, unless they're going to be connected within the work.

I also try not put too much information in the title. That will generally discourage a reader. There was a time when very long, descriptive titles were used. Generally, for creative works, that practice has been discontinued. Even with works that are academic, long titles are discouraged.

We, as writers, need as many advantages as we can have to capture the attention and interest of the reader.

One technique I use when creating a title, is to take a key word from the work. For example, if a work deals with love and also with roses, a title might be: "The Rose of Love." Or: "Love's Roses." That technique will put a "proper hat" on the work, give the reader information about the work, and because it contains a key word or two that appear in the work, there is a feeling of continuity.

Very cryptic, or wordings which have meaning only to me, are usually reconsidered for something else. If the reader has to begin the work by trying to analyze the meaning of the title for content, that might discourage him/her from enjoying a very fine effort.

If I generate a title that is interesting but has nothing to do with the work, it will leave the reader very puzzled; even thinking that something important was missed in their reading.

A writer should also feel free and even encouraged, up to a point, to change titles when the work is new. If the work goes off for publication, titles are usually set, approved by the publisher, and won't be changed after publication. New works that are presented, here or elsewhere, have editorial latitudes that help the writer. Once set, and read critically--even just for enjoyment, the writer should look at any changes carefully. This work, for example, has been edited for content and for title. I thought the content sounded too pompous and arrogant, and the title too vague.

These are some of the more important considerations I use when trying to find a good title. They are mostly based on what readers have told me about the titles I've used.

I hope they will be useful to you. ^_^

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        06-24-2009     Frank Fields        

Your original title might hot actually have been "copied." There are many works with titles that are the same as those of other authors' works. Without wanting to sound harsh or overly critical, to accuse another writer of copying a title, borders on accusations of plagiarism. With titles, however, a great deal more latitude must be shown, simply because there are bound to be innocent duplications. But, the title is, after all, an inherent part of the work, and the primary "tag" by which that work will be known and referenced.

If you were satisfied with your final, revised title, motivations for the revision to one side, then that is really all that's important. Especially if the title was definitive of your work.

I'm pleased this article was helpful to you, but I would caution every reader: I don't profess to be a qualified, legal arbiter on these matters. My concerns and motivations for this article were more aesthetic than anything else.

Bottom line remains: you were pleased with what you accomplished, which is the more important consideration than thoughts which would demean your accomplishments.

And I am pleased that you found this short article worthy of a visit and praise plus comment.

Thank you ^_^

Frank :)

        06-24-2009     Cynthia Baello        

Thank you for this very helpful article on titles to a work. My poems and essays usually come first from thoughts or what I had read from my morning devotions on God's Word. I wrote a poem titled "Inner Peace" from Zechariah 2:4 but after posting it at one site, I saw my title "Inner Peace" copied by another writer. My poem was about inner peace from God, but hers was quite so irrelevant to the title. I had to change the title and add "Zechariah 2:4" to distinguish my work from hers as we both posted the same titled poems at almost the same time. Since I have posted that poem last year, I could no longer change it for website reasons. Did I do right in not changing the whole title? The title I chose said everything about the poem.

This article gives good advice and guidance for us to chose the appropriate title, and so make the work memorable.

        11-06-2008     Eric Gasparich        

Great advice.

I agree that title choice is a very important part of writing. In the case of a poem, it should almost be like the key signature in music. Things may deviate wildly, but they should always comes back to the tonic pitch in some way.

In stories, well-chosen chapter titles will tell the plot in microcosm. Most impressive are those writers who can do it well with just one word titles. Myself, I have used aphorisms like Fiat Justitia Ruat Coelum. (I esp. like foreign language maxims when they really work. Otherwise it's just pretentious.) Or sometimes a quote from the from the story itself - like "This is how we fight" in my most recent effort.

One of my favorites was in a story I read some years ago, where the author used the title "Little Bunny Fufu" to metaphorically hint at a coming battle with a ... let us say, supernatural bully.

Titles are important.



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