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03-05-2009
Martha Rosanbalm
I can put myself right into this...it is great.
The picture is so vivid.
"a pile of bleaching bones"
Very well written.I look forward to reading more of your work.
God Bless
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02-11-2009
Raja Sharma
Your poems do have something unique and it always compells me to read them over and again. Your images and metaphors have been placed not only appropriately but also highly convincingly.
God bless you
Rajasir
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02-10-2009
Susan Brown
p.s. Erotic poetry with a Valentine's Day breaking barrier ~ reefing ~ type of feel then? Sandy at that! I had to return and salt the water just a tad bit, longer. You know, I had mentioned to June last year I was going to attempt to "wade" into new water and write something steamy for Valentines Day and still, all that comes natural to me much as I hate to admit it "hee..hee" is what I refer to as, Black Valentine spiraling verse. Doomed to remain the stain glass windowed, hand tapping, widow of old, I suppose. ha!
Susan
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02-10-2009
Susan Brown
This might be too personal for the average Jill to comment upon after looking at the age rating? I will leap in and attempt to do so any...who... as I can't stand the silence sitting in the open "boating" box, next to the poets, good name. Old Viking shores, frozen grave(s) and lest not let us forget... the bleaching bones. The images are my idea of grandeur. Oneness's out sweeping undertow. Dragging a score of opening breakers along for, its final wakening turbulent ~underwater~ sea slide. Sad, but as usual, excellent "metaphors" anchoring no matter what this is actually about?
Enjoyed,
Susan
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