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Unless

by Richard Reed Jr
copyright 02-07-2009


Age Rating: 18 +

Unless

you are a harbor
willing to receive
only one sturdy vessel
into your soft smooth cove
ready to provide
an anchoring rock for this one swaying ship

let me pass to sail alone
through all life's storms
to dash myself against
old viking northern shores
where a frozen grave
will be my end

unless
you are a strong warm cave
accepting one wild mountain lion
who dashes here and slashes there
seeking his refuge deep inside you
where you protect no other

let me pass to wander down the path
with never a mate to walk along
to climb the highest mountain
in my range--to die up there
at the highest peak--
a pile of bleaching bones






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        03-05-2009     Martha Rosanbalm        

I can put myself right into this...it is great.
The picture is so vivid.
"a pile of bleaching bones"
Very well written.I look forward to reading more of your work.
God Bless



        02-11-2009     Raja Sharma        

Your poems do have something unique and it always compells me to read them over and again. Your images and metaphors have been placed not only appropriately but also highly convincingly.
God bless you
Rajasir

        02-10-2009     Susan Brown        

p.s. Erotic poetry with a Valentine's Day breaking barrier ~ reefing ~ type of feel then? Sandy at that! I had to return and salt the water just a tad bit, longer. You know, I had mentioned to June last year I was going to attempt to "wade" into new water and write something steamy for Valentines Day and still, all that comes natural to me much as I hate to admit it "hee..hee" is what I refer to as, Black Valentine spiraling verse. Doomed to remain the stain glass windowed, hand tapping, widow of old, I suppose. ha!
Susan

        02-10-2009     Susan Brown        

This might be too personal for the average Jill to comment upon after looking at the age rating? I will leap in and attempt to do so any...who... as I can't stand the silence sitting in the open "boating" box, next to the poets, good name. Old Viking shores, frozen grave(s) and lest not let us forget... the bleaching bones. The images are my idea of grandeur. Oneness's out sweeping undertow. Dragging a score of opening breakers along for, its final wakening turbulent ~underwater~ sea slide. Sad, but as usual, excellent "metaphors" anchoring no matter what this is actually about?
Enjoyed,
Susan




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