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Absolutely Everything

by Sarah Barrett (Age: 19)
copyright 03-11-2009
Contest Winner


Age Rating: 13 +

My favorite part about love?
When he sneaks up behind me at school,
covers my eyes, and says, "guess who?"
That's my favorite.

My favorite part about love?
When he calls me for no reason at all.
No one is speaking, but we are happy being connected.
That's my favorite.

My favorite part about love?
Knowing that he'll always be at my side,
whether I need a hug, or just someone to talk to.
That's my favorite.

My favorite part about love?
Knowing that even when I embarrass myself,
he thinks it's cute that I blush.
That's my favorite.

My favorite part about love?
When his lips are on mine,
and the butterflies make my heart skip beats.
That's my favorite.

My favorite part about love?
When we hide under the blankets,
and pretend the night will never end.
That's my favorite.

My favorite part about love?
Absolutely everything.






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        05-20-2011     Rebecca Morgan        

This is soooo pretty! I like that each line started with the same sentence, and that it all flowed well with each other. I hope this is a true life experience :) Good Job and thank you for sharing this with us.
-Rebecca Morgan

        05-23-2010     Frank Fields        

Sometimes I'll go back to a work, especially those I've favorited, and read the work again. Just to see if my original comments were worth the space.

This work, after a few more reads, maintained its focus, depth and direction so well that I can truly say without wanting to sound like an English Professor, that it is just as delightful now, as it was then.

Again, thank you for sharing this with us. ^^

Frank :)

        04-12-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

This was an adorable poem! I found myself smiling as I read all the sweet sentiments about love. The ending lines were a perfect ending to such a cute poem. It was nicely written and described all the various situations well. Good work!

~Leigh

        04-09-2010     Mae Futter Stein        

Hi Sarah,
Absolutely Everything is such a cute poem. I think you did a wonderful job on this one. I can see why it is a contest winner.
You have so much imagination in it, and I love the ending where you say, My favorite part about love is Absolutely everything. Thank you for sharing it............Mae



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