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Speaking
by Megan C. (Age: 15)
copyright 04-16-2009


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Talking, trilling, tactless tantrums
Ranting, rambling, randomly ramblesome
Aimless, abstract, accidental accusations
Babbling, blabbing, bleakly bleating
Screeching, screaming, scattered scolding
Promising, pleading, pressuring "please!"s.
All endlessly entering my ears.
Banging, breaking, beware of bleeping
Fools! Frustration finds me, foam-mouthing
Stepping, stalling, sounds are stopping
Sighing, sweet, soft silence.....
And then....
Speaking!




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05-25-2010 Leigh G.    

Very nice! I love all the different terms you used for all the different ways we speak, and the well written anticipation of silence. Good work, the concept behind this one was very interesting. ^-^


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05-07-2009 Leah G.    

I really liked this! I loved how it used all of the synonyms for speaking, AND had alliteration. The "sweet, soft silence..." line seemed to add a bit of a break/relief to the poem. This was a very creative piece, and turned out great. Good job!


04-20-2009 Cassie S.    

Haha! I like this! I'm always trying to find other words for "Said" in stories iI write and I guess now I know where to go! Haha nice write.
CassandraJSG


04-17-2009 Frank Fields    

LOL ^^

How true! An endless cacophony of sounds until the blessed silence returns, once more. I often wonder, though, whether it's the external sounds/noises that disturb, or the ones within that clamor for self-important attention. In my case, I prefer not to answer that, tyvm. XD

Excellent write. Enjoyed your alliteration, wording, assonance, onomatopoeia placement, pace, flow, all of it! Very good. ^_^

Frank :)


04-17-2009 Raja Sharma    

You are very good at alliterative lines which are very poetic as well, however, I would like to suggest to you to work on meter and rhyme scheme. You are very innovative and the poem is really very intelligently penned down.
Good work
God bless you
Rajasir


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