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Falling, Raining

by Megan Cox (Age: 23)
copyright 05-19-2009


Age Rating: 13 +

Words,
Falling,
Raining
Down the page.
My eyes follow,
Your eyes search
For words
That you want to see.
Words,
Raining,
Escaping
From my mouth.
I whisper,
You listen
For words
That you need to hear.
Words,
Raining,
Flowing
Into my ears.
I listen quietly,
You speak to me,
With words
I'm desperate to hear.
Words,
Sweet,
Muffled
In our mouths.
I hold you,
You kiss me.
Words,
Lost,
Unneeded
In our love.
I need you,
You want me.
Words,
Falling,
Raining,
Soft as snow.
I confess to you,
You won't leave me now.






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        09-28-2009     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

The presentation in a whole was simple, but it accented the meaning and significance of the peace to flow and convey the meaning to the reader very well. This was a very enjoyable piece; I found the repetition on some of the words used to introduce new topics a very nice touch. Good work, keep writing!


Leigh

        08-13-2009     Kimberly Angelone        

Words, Lost, Unneeded In our love. - excellent!!! this is a great write. it flows and it says so much with short simplicity.


        08-01-2009     Samantha Powers        

its pretty.. falling like rain =D
you must have had fun writing this cuz i know i would. it flowed perfectly and the ending was very nice. altho im not to fond of snow anymore since I lived in colorado for so long but now being in arizona snow sounds nice haha

        06-22-2009     Raja Sharma        

Yes, everything falls into its proper place.The conclusion is really superb.
It is a wonderful write! You really have your unique way with diction.
God bless you
Rajasir

        05-26-2009     Frank Fields        

I have to agree with Lauren. The flow, the rhythm, the visions, the style, and its gentleness all led to to a very successful and smiling ending. At least that's what I had at the end. A smile. Thank you for offering this little bit of love. ^^

Frank :)

        05-20-2009     Lauren Turner        

Beautiful rhythm. Its like the words were just falling into place. I love the style, its very suiting for this type of poem. The way you wrote it fits perfectly with the title.
Wonderful topic too.
"I need you,
You want me"
I love those lines.
Keep up the great work. <3



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