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Emerald Eyes

by Alan Reed (Age: 64)
copyright 06-20-2009


Age Rating: 4 +
Emerald Eyes
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Sparkle
to opals do they lend
shine
to emeralds they offend

exude
the missive they can send
glow
despair they often mend

burnish
surpass and do not bend
blush
others know what you intend

bloom
such kindness they distend
glitter
to all whom you befriend

cure
any wrong you must attend
heal
put right before the end




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        09-16-2009     Mae Futter Stein        

Alan,

I love emerald green colors, also. Your poem is very deep. I understand where you are going with the poem, but I do not quite understand it all. It is very difficult to read the meaning, but I did like the rhyming and phrases. Very nice. Mae

        07-20-2009     Raja Sharma        

This sparkling piece is not only enchanting but also so meaningful if one could get to the bottom of the imagery. The images you have applied are definitely praise-worthy.
The typographical style also adds to the beauty.
God bless you
Rajasir



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