11-07-2009
Eric Siedzikowski
Wonderfully and eloquently written.Within every verse that I read through it placed me at that moment in time in which the people had their experience.This effect within the movements of the poem were very pleasant.The descriptiveness was impeccable and lofty in a nice manner that showed that the people in writ were of the recherche' and not of the rabble.Sincerely,Eric
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08-11-2009
Walter Jones
A social grace, a mix of eyes peeking, voice clear, love a drop in wax, form please to eyes and mind, a truth too real to pass, at his passing of the glass, a perfect performance, rose in the street... more than well done, excellent write... Walt
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08-01-2009
Samantha Powers
ugh in a way it kinda reminds me of my mom (not a place we wunna go)
it was very beautiful like following a story of beautiful words and sadness but still amazing and enticing to readers. i lurved it =D I shall have to read more of your work cuz i really enjoy your style
Im gunna go get the tub of icecream so i dont cry or anything haha
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07-27-2009
Mae Futter Stein
Very nice wording. I enjoyed your poem very much.
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07-27-2009
June Nazarian
Alan - a very nice but sad poem about a loved one who just can't or doesn't want to stop, and just how much is too much from the other person's point of view. I've often wondered what is so difficult about limiting drink to the occasional social one - that is until someone gives me a box of chocolate - then I get it.
I enjoyed this. June
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