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08-05-2009
Raja Sharma
Stone is cold
Angel in rolling spline
Rock cast aside
Anger and pride
What waits on the other side
Yes, this is the mystery which perhaps every living being would like to unravel. Sir, you have really shaken the sleeping emotions which sometimes cunningly sleep away, hiding from the reality and clamour of this world.
But the most significant thing in these lines is the power of the poetic emotion which does not happen to be dominated by even the most horrible truths.The tone is so eloquent and free that one can only marvel at and praise your skills.
God bless you
Rajasir
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08-04-2009
Susan Brown
I feel what remains awake and watching from the other side is never lost to us- "forgiveness" and emotional rest they harbor. This poem reminds me of the fact, we our all just human. I find freedom still burns and hauntingly rings in many of your poems. Sad and vividly deep the lingering sorrow residing in the shredded heart and soul pieces hanging on by a collection of thin threads from those mind altering places of night and days gone by. This tune never sleeps for very long. I can't rate this for its too fresh and real again..., today. Have you tried a haiku or a limerick? Feel the smile?
Susan
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