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I'll Do So Much More

by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 44)
copyright 05-14-2001


Age Rating: 10 +

(Chorus)
Of all that I've been thru,
what's meant the most is you
You're a precious gift to me
- incited and uplifted me

Under all the stars above,
somehow I found your love!
And like I've said before,
we'll do so much more!
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I may not climb a mountain,
or stand on every shore
But that's ok with me
because I've done so much more

The sun rises in the morning
showing me what's in store
Then all I do is smile
because I'll do so much more

I've done more than most
but not as much as many
What I have isn't alot
but what I've got is plenty

If you look for treasures
I bet you won't find any
No, I don't have it all,
but what I've got is plenty

I am blessed with plenty,
rewarded beyond compare
What I do have in my life
makes the people stare

They wish they had it too,
some say it isn't fair
But that's ok with me,
for it makes the people stare

People stare because your love
showers like a fountain
They pray to be all I am
from upon their lofty mountains

All the times I've been graced
I can't even count them
Me, I'll not be jealous
as I look on lofty mountains

I may not climb those mountains
nor walk a sandy shore
But that's ok with me
because I'll do so much more

The sun sets in the evening
as earth reveals its lore
It brings to me a smile
because I've done so much more
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(Chorus)
Of all that I've been thru,
what's meant the most is you
You're a precious gift to me
- incited and uplifted me

Under all the stars above,
somehow I found your love!
And like I've said before,
we'll do so much more!






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        10-29-2006     Richard Reed Jr        

This is as beautiful as anything you write now.
Any guy would be extremely lucky to find you.
Your poems light me up, but your sweet personality lights me up even more.

Thank you for your writings,

Rich

        05-03-2006     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

As the others said, this is a truly touching poem! Or should I say song? A lot of my poems are songs, and I really liked this one. I really love it when poems tell stories, and when they're meaningful and full of metaphors and comparisons that pain a picture in my mind. The flow is very good, and the song itself has a strong topic, further strengthen by how you presented it. I have a few poems that remind me of the message that you're sending out here, but over all I really loved this poem. Oh, in the forth paragraph, you spelled because wrong. :) That's all the grammar or spelling flaws I can find. Great work, keep writing!

Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders!

        08-26-2005     David Pekrul        

This is a beautiful testimony to love and contentment. Well-done.

        04-27-2005     Nancy Pawley        

Mary, love aloows us and sometimes even makes us do so much more than we ever thought we could. Wonderful write.
Nancy

        04-21-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

This is a cute song. Thanks, Anthony

        07-26-2004     Misty Montier        

Mary,

First, I want to thank you for the comments you've left on some of my works.

Second, this is a wonderful poem...nice flow...very uplifting to read.

Look forward to reading more of your works.

Misty

        10-08-2001     Mary -BrytEyz- Ball        

Umm.. not sure CLB. Did I miss something? What does that have to do with my post? Just wondering if I'm being dense and missing something here... lol

        04-01-2001     Mary -BrytEyz- Ball        

I did write this with all intentions of it being a song. *fingers crossed* It's in the hands of the band now tho. I'll let you all know when/if it does. *smiles really big!*

I love life! Can anyone tell? I love love! I love my children.. gosh, I'm sickeningly happy today! :)



        04-01-2001     Heidi K.        

Mary,
I love this. I am so glad I can finally leave a comment. I think it was a problem with my PC though and not the website but I kept getting an error when I tried to leave comments. LOL.

This was a pleasure to read. *smile*

Heidi



        04-01-2001     Beverley McInnis        

HI!

I really heard the music as I read this lovely poem!!



        04-01-2001     Jolene Coiner        

I really enjoyed this and it IS catchy.



        04-01-2001     M.E. (Bunny) Eastveld        

Hi Bryt-eyz!! How's it goin'? Yeah, I could see someone like Linda Ronstadt singing this one. Nice tko read you again. Thanks for stopping by "Meanwhile, back at the ranch..." Come again sometime, and leave us some of your poetry when you go again, eh? Sincerely, M.E. (Bunny) Eastveld



        04-01-2001     Robin M.        


Very nice!





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