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02-01-2010
Richard Reed Jr
Congratulationss on winning Cassie's contest. No one was more deserving then you.
You capture your emtions so skillfully and transmit them so clearly. You have such love and compassion yet you seem fearful of giving your all, for as tough as you appear on the outside, you appear most fragile deep inside.
May happiness blow your way always.
Rich
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09-27-2009
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Good day! I just wanted to award the praise points I was unable when I commented originally. Your poem is quite deserving of them. ^-^ Even on the second read, this piece was enjoyable. Good work, I look forward to reading more!
Leigh
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09-11-2009
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Very nice; this was an enjoyable read! The mood, vocabulary, and overall flow of the composition were all very good. I especially liked the third and final paragraphs; they had a great deal of meaning reflected in the written words.
Although, in the first line of the second paragraph, there's a typo; 'I' needs to be capitalized. But that's the only error I saw. :)
Good job! And congrats on winning the contest.
Leigh
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08-19-2009
Cassie Sweeney
Samantha! Well obviously you're the winner of my contest and I just wanted to congradulate you and say thank you for entering! This isn't exactly what I was thinking when I put up the contest but it ended up working out along with it and I really loved it. It's very descriptive and emotional and I like that you showed the steps and process of forgiveness and the aftermath of how you still can't completely trust them even though you want to and you forgave them. Great write! =]
-Cassie J
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