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09-15-2009
Cynthia Baello
So hauntingly sad but profound in expression, all enveloped in brevity. It made my heart stop and my being float in the words.
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09-13-2009
Raja Sharma
Yes, dear friend,
This Senryu so laconically yet so eloquently expresses the irony of human life and wonderful inability of human that I can only utter the words "Wonderful!!"
This one is perhaps the best of the poems of the genre which I have gone through in my lifetime. Three lines flowing together and hitting the target.
Great!!!
God bless you
Rajasir
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09-12-2009
June Nazarian
Alan, you have said it all in your beautiful senryu with the accompanying, haunting illustration. When in a state of feeling hopeless, there is little one can do but express emotions in a variety of healthy ways, this certainly being one. Eventually, armed with the tincture of time, roses smell sweet again, I know. June
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