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04-20-2010
Emily Valle
This was done very well.
It was all the questions that somehow race through your mind in just a second. In that one second that realize that things are changing and your life will never be the same...but somehow the world goes on. You know that time will keep going and skys will stay blue, but in that instant, you're not so sure.
This presented those feelings very well. Good work
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12-06-2009
Rodger Moyer
I really like your poem. It expresses what I and I'm sure most people feel when love changes and departs. Sad in some ways but very true, the feelings come through your words. Beautifully crafted, one of my favorites.
Regards, Rodger
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12-05-2009
Sam Ande
This poem reminds me of past experiences, which later turn out for the worst.
The thought of losing some you love is awful, it makes you nervous and you think about questions that you don't want to think about.
:O you've made me all teary
thanks for another beautiful piece. Sam
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11-17-2009
Mae Futter Stein
Cynthia,
I did so enjoy your poem "After You Leave." It has wonderful words that pour from your heart into such a musical melody of love and departure. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Hugs, Mae
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