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They Can Count

by Cynthia Baello (Age: 63)
copyright 10-09-2009


Age Rating: 4 +

PART ONE - DIAMOND AND HER KITTENS

She was a proud mother
Of four little kitties,
She told us thereafter
Of her maternal bliss.

Two days later, two died,
She looked and was frantic-
She thought we tried to hide
Her newborns in the attic.

Her mournful mother's cry
Kept gnawing through the night
To her we tried to lie-
Only two saw the light.

Yes, cats know how to count
So we had to explain,
Whatever one discounts-
Mothers cats know the pain.



PART TWO - MACKIE AND KUTCH


So if cats can count,
Well the dogs can too.
In our home there are two
Who guard who goes through.

They know who is still out
They will watch the gate waiting
Not at home hereabouts-
Which master is still missing.

They know by the sound
And can smell miles away,
Their master has been found
And he is on his way.

Their jubilant greeting
Say the number is complete,
They are through with the counting-
And they are ready to eat.


PART THREE - SAMMY THE SPIDER

Now you say this is odd
And there is no proof
Meet a spider lad
Who lives up our roof.
Sammy's home is a web
Of clean measured strands
Numbered lines does he have
Lots of room in his hands.
He can count the distance
Each web from the other
Skills learned by chance
Obviously from his mother.











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        10-22-2009     Alan Reed        

What an imagination and application of artistic creativity. You are talented and observant Cynthia. I love this write for its simplicity combined with its complexity in thought and in words sewn together like a wonderful tapestry. -Alan

        10-16-2009     Cynthia Baello        

Thank you Mae and Raja, the two kittens died after being born prematurely, possibly lacking in days, while two survived. The dogs are still alive, and the spider Sammy has moved to a tree near our house, having gotten married and needing a bigger space.

Cynthia

        10-14-2009     Raja Sharma        

Every line is the presentation of the persona's affection towards the creatures which are gradually being neglected in this world.
You have said it so beautifully and poetically that I can only say the poem is not only wonderful but highly emphatic and emotive.I have three dogs and if one day I decide to write about them, I am sure that I would come out with hundreds of wonderful tales to the delight of children.
God bless you
Rajasir

        10-11-2009     Mae Futter Stein        

Cynthia,
Lives of kittens and puppies are very important, too, as they are part of our family also. God loves the little creatures of the world and will protect them the same as everyone. It is so nice to read a poem of your loving animals. Animals go to heaven, too. Nice subject....Mae



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