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02-01-2013
Wayne Thomas
Hey, long time! Very nice lyric. Interesting, different from others of yours that I've read. What other good things to say? Take it slowly,sip it like a fine wine, then read it again! OK! Wayne
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10-22-2009
Raja Sharma
This is yet another of your beautifully rhyming beauty.It really flows very well. The diction is appropriate, and its simplicity and sincerity of tone can be labeled as its strength.Dew drop, in general, is a very insignificant object, but your lines have really, metaphorically, raised it to the glorious heights.
Wonderful!
Rajasir
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10-19-2009
June Nazarian
Mae, what a cute poem. I want to go to the Dew Drop Inn because I like its name. Your poem is another of your rhythmic rhymers, filled with charm. So glad for the hit on the head and the happy ending - don't like sad endings. Love your upbeat style. June
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10-19-2009
Richard Reed Jr
Ha Ha. eh eh eh. This one made my mouth break out into a big 'ole grin.
The whole poem was one of levity but, I really loved the twist ending. It crept up on me unexpectedly.
Best for me was:
"I tossed in the sea shell and wished I were dead
The waves tossed it back, hitting my head ".
Keep 'em comin'.
Rich
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