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Leaving

by Rodger Moyer (Age: 58)
copyright 12-19-2009


Age Rating: 13 +

I saw the wind rush through the trees
The branches bowing to its might
And endlessly it howled with glee
All through the day, into the night

The leaves let go their clutching grasp
And with the wind, at last, flew free
To rise and dive in graceful flight
Then fall to earth, beneath the tree

Where there they laid so silently
So helpless for the world to see
Just hoping for a friendly breeze
To soar again above the trees

Their taste of freedom short but sweet
Through autumns brisk and chilling rain
The wind would lift them off the ground
Not high enough for lifes refrain

Their fiery hues began to fade
As darkness took more light each day
Securely tucked in winters white
Into the earth, they’d melt away

The tree stood bare against the wind
Defiant in its silent stance
The beauty of its nakedness
Subdued the wind, a calming trance

The roots fed on the melted leaves
And under mother natures care
Spring soon unveiled the trees re-birth
As newborn leaves danced in the air

By Rodger Moyer






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        06-30-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

The descriptions in this piece were quite amazing. Now that I'm reading your poems, I can see that all of the five stars are very much earned! The image created by this poem is powerful, sorrowful, and very vivid. Excellent work!


~Leigh of the Commenting Community

        04-20-2010     Emily Valle        

This was beautiful.
I loved that it could be looked at from the point of view, that this was about the trees and the seasons...
But also, it can be seen as representing what life is like.
Things change, things come and go. We too have those moments of freedom and happiness where we fly.
Then sometimes those moments are gone.
Change can be good and happy, bad and sad, but either way, it's all part of life.
Really enjoyed this!

        02-25-2010     Cynthia Baello        

Your poem so magnificently paints the picture of Autumn, (my birth month November) and the words so beautifully flow like the wind and the sway of the branches of the tree. The "feelings" of fallen leaves also made it relevant to life itself, where the past dies and falls, and from which the future feeds and springs up with new hope. Nature lessons aptly woven in the verses birth much wisdom for us all.

        01-17-2010     Raja Sharma        

Nothing delights me more than finding the poetic lines which flow smoothly along the poetic meters and simplicity of diction.
Your style brings to mind William Wordsworth's line "Poetry should be written in a common man's language".

I believe the poets, including myself, vainly try to add affections and vague diction, thinking that we are being highly poetic. But I see that my mind is dancing with your lines.
It is majestically wonderful.
God bless you
Rajasir

        01-14-2010     Mae Futter Stein        

I did so enjoy reading your poem about the tree. I put myself as the tree with the wind flowing over me. Through the top and all around,
Right through the roots above the ground. The words were like the flowing wind. I wanted to read it once more again. Oh how I enjoyed it.
Thank you for sharing.....Mae



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