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06-30-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
The descriptions in this piece were quite amazing. Now that I'm reading your poems, I can see that all of the five stars are very much earned! The image created by this poem is powerful, sorrowful, and very vivid. Excellent work!
~Leigh of the Commenting Community
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04-20-2010
Emily Valle
This was beautiful.
I loved that it could be looked at from the point of view, that this was about the trees and the seasons...
But also, it can be seen as representing what life is like.
Things change, things come and go. We too have those moments of freedom and happiness where we fly.
Then sometimes those moments are gone.
Change can be good and happy, bad and sad, but either way, it's all part of life.
Really enjoyed this!
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02-25-2010
Cynthia Baello
Your poem so magnificently paints the picture of Autumn, (my birth month November) and the words so beautifully flow like the wind and the sway of the branches of the tree. The "feelings" of fallen leaves also made it relevant to life itself, where the past dies and falls, and from which the future feeds and springs up with new hope. Nature lessons aptly woven in the verses birth much wisdom for us all.
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01-17-2010
Raja Sharma
Nothing delights me more than finding the poetic lines which flow smoothly along the poetic meters and simplicity of diction.
Your style brings to mind William Wordsworth's line "Poetry should be written in a common man's language".
I believe the poets, including myself, vainly try to add affections and vague diction, thinking that we are being highly poetic. But I see that my mind is dancing with your lines.
It is majestically wonderful.
God bless you
Rajasir
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01-14-2010
Mae Futter Stein
I did so enjoy reading your poem about the tree. I put myself as the tree with the wind flowing over me. Through the top and all around,
Right through the roots above the ground. The words were like the flowing wind. I wanted to read it once more again. Oh how I enjoyed it.
Thank you for sharing.....Mae
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