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04-15-2013
betterthingstocome
OH MY GOODNESS
Jade you just made me break down in tears. That was so heartfelt!!! Sentimental writings are so close and dear to my heart. ---Guess I'm kinda a mush, lol
Thank you for sharing!!!!
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12-09-2010
Jade Luke
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04-20-2010
Emily Valle
I loved this. It really spoke to me. The emotion behind it was presented very well.
I really appreciated the line that said:
"You say it’ll be all right
Just close your eyes and dream.
I know I love you
But you’re not what you seem"
Brilliant!
I've been and still am, deeply in love with someone who was nothing like what I thought...And it's so hard to walk away from that. You make it so real in your head that you can't convince yourself that it wasn't.
But thank you for this, this was very well done.
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02-24-2010
Richard Reed Jr
I would like to read your poetry when you get well. This one sounds very good to my ears.
The Chinese say 'Whether one lives to eighty or ten' each is thankful for his/her life. My brother is dying of cancer and I have Parkinson's disease. Perhaps I know a bit of how you feel. Anyway, It's not how many moments you have spent, it's how you spend them that counts.
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