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03-27-2010
phantomwrays
I really liked how you started it off the poem, Therefore; I guess I haven't died, very fun and interesting to read and it made me smile. Life is worth living but sometimes it takes us a while to start. Great poem.
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01-26-2010
June Nazarian
Mae - another absolutely delightful poem from your pen. Love the way you are so upbeat, funny, and full of life, living each day as though it were not the last, but the first, as it should be for all of us. Thanks for the smiles... June
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01-26-2010
Frank Fields
This is a perfect example of how a writer can take an old, tired, worn-out cliche, and with a with a little thought turn that cliche into an inspirational adventure for the reader. Beguilement, first and foremost. Then a continued journey, offering interest even intrigue, until we're done and seemed unconscious of where you'd taken us. Excellent, this. ^_^
Frank :)
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