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04-12-2010
Raja Sharma
Wonder out load
What am I doing here
A classicist like you can only understand how the images can be made to dance and compel the readers to avoid simply reading your poems, instead, to minutely scrutinize every word, every image, and every vision that you create,Sir.
You are doing your part as a master and in the process inspiring many to ponder before writing the lines which only end up to be rhyming musical noise of commonplace.
Wonderful
God bless you
Rajasir
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04-02-2010
Alan Reed
We are here wishing to feel like what we will do will be meaningful -- that the legacy left by the past turns to future synergies. Good or bad, who is our barrister ?? - nobody but ourselves really. Why are we here and why are you there? What have you done and what will you do? Paint it now and never let it stop. For others certainly will talk about it.
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03-28-2010
Cynthia Baello
I find this very deeply profound, particularly now that almost all people all over the world show faces of emptied hope and anguished pain. Your lines flow like video shots of a thousand facial expressions, and with your writer's sensitivity you make the reader "feel" the emotions painted fleetingly in these words. Remarkable piece of writing and amazing impact it gives as one masterful tapestry of humanity.
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03-25-2010
Susan Brown
Whatever are we doing here? Seems like we all take turns asking that personal question, block after surmounting block, "wondering out load" when climbing up and down our lines of life. I love the title, feel the cracks in the sidewalk, see the faces all the more vividly after reading this piece. Your writing speaks to the young as clearly as the old. I appreciate how you connect us all together, like dots on a paper, near and far.
Susan
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