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02-26-2011
Mae Futter Stein
Hi Alan,
I like this very much. Wonderful rhyming that flows like the time of both past and future. The picture is perfect for this poem. I'm sorry that I missed reading this before. Great!
Always, Mae
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11-14-2010
Elijah Sowder
As a Sci-Fi fan, I've always been fascinated with the theory of time travel and your poem is very interesting how we may not always like what we find if we had the option to move forward or back, but another thing too is that any person that is seeking something may not find what they were expecting which will lead to their disappointment.
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04-26-2010
June Nazarian
Hi Alan - Like Walt I too loved the picture and the story. I am fascinated by the idea of space travel backward and forward, in fact just the mystery of time itself. You last stanza says it all. Let's lope we don't hate the present, lol. June
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04-22-2010
Walter Jones
Loved the picture and the story, the hope for man, the poem, and face, for that much power, I wonder and dream, exceptional write.. Walt
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