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You Knew The Time

by Richard Reed Jr
copyright 04-18-2010


Age Rating: 10 +

With thanks to Billy Collins

the first time you
and your new sportscar
took smartly to the road
the highway stretched
long and far across the miles
into the red and purple sunset
and you knew how high you felt
as you barelled down the road at break-neck speed
laughing as you went
until the black and whites
with their rotating bubble gum machines
pulled you over to the side
just one stop of many
that would take you across
raging rivers and calm blue lakes
up and down mountain passes
between their jagged peaks
over hills of crumpled velvet
with gesticulating trees reaching out for you

no matter the sheen of the polished paint
no matter how many times you wax
rust and dust eventually
eat away and cover what once was new
and though the meter measures
insufficient miles to slow this doozy down
it suddenly stops dead

still turn the key another time
when the purring of the engine starts
come open the door and I will ride with you
until the turn of the bend
where you must go beyond
and where I cannot...






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        05-18-2010     Wayne Thomas        

Rich, this is great. Probably your best work to date. There is lots to see, lots to feel, plenty of action. Like your character, I ride shotgun anymore--state grabbed my license. Too many prescription drugs, four of which act as sedatives, perhaps why I don't write so much these days. I do have a new one about ready, likely sometime this week or next. Maybe you'll like it. Hope so. I reiterate--this is a class work. My best, Wayne

        04-26-2010     June Nazarian        

Richard - this is one of my very favorites of yours, especially because I know where you are coming from. Your brother Rob is a gem to be taken from us way too soon. Your admiration and love for him shines throughout your beautiful poem as does the nature of who is he. Your ride with him has been the gift of family love, I have also known the ride and share the deep anguish as we let him go. xo June

        04-20-2010     Alan Reed        

A beautiful journey painted with vivid colors, images and thought. Isn't it funny how life's smallest acts and gesticulations turn fate into fate? It would be cool if we could go everywhere together but more cool is the part where we part just to be ourselves - matter in a giant mixing bowl. Excellent Richard, -Alan

        04-19-2010     Mae Futter Stein        

Alright Richard!

Absolutely love it. I like that rotating bubble gum machine. How clever. Sounds like a thrill of a ride even in your polished painted well waxed new car. That's what I call "breaking it in."
I enjoyed reading "You Knew The Time." Good one.

Mae



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