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08-15-2010
Emily Valle
This shows how a lot of the love we can feel for someone is what we imagine in our minds. It's something surly to be careful of! But it seems to be unavoidable. :)
Great story, the picture went well.
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06-02-2010
phantomwrays
It's interesting how you can fall in love with someone you have never even met. But you really described such a complicated story so well in just a few lines. Good job.
Victoria
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05-31-2010
Regina Pate
Well that's about how I felt for most part of my life. I know I shouldn't say this but at least I'm am not alone. So now you know you are in good company I hope. Maybe we should stop dreaming of what he would be like if he liked us. Instead we should wonder something better. I wonder who is dreaming of us. Maybe their is someone out there who read this poem and realized their dream was crushed. Who knows sounds good. Hey we may have to dream alone but nobody said we had to dream the worst! It's still our dream,great write, good job, thanks,
Regina Pate
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05-31-2010
Susan Brown
Mae,
Good morning comes to my mind, to speak. Nothing like a walk down reality street, to bring one back to earth. I suppose this is truly about emotion, but I love the way it reads like an on going- drama. The lady in red holds more than the coffee mug. She steams/reeks of power. Interesting!
Susan
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05-30-2010
Frank Fields
The image! One of my most favorite anime characters, ever. Is Asuka, of course. The same character as on my author's page.
The poem! Started off with a pablum progression of some love cliches. Until the ending! Visions of forbidden love and heartbreak at not being able to fulfill that dream.
The other complications which you let us glimpse, I'll let other readers find those for themselves.
Very, very nicely done.
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