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08-15-2010
Emily Valle
I read the last line again and again. It was very sweet with emotion bursting out of each line.
But that last line, "I can't help it, I just cry"
I think that would strike a chord with anyone. We've all been there, where we just can't help it anymore.
Thank you for sharing. Great work I think.
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07-20-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This poem was very beautiful. Though losing a loved one, especially a parent, is something undeniably painful, it's very true that they should never be forgotten. It's also important to remember the 'Gift of Love' that only parents give to their children.
Excellent work!
~Leigh of the Commenting Community
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