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Beyond the Lorelei Mists
by
Wayne Thomas
(Age: 63)
copyright 12-13-2010
  
Age Rating: 10 +
by Wayne and Darcy Thomas
Pale skin stretched taut over fine white bones grimy fingers pull from threadbare linen sack a moldy chunk of black bread. Bit by bit he pulls off the green and hurls it into icy breakers rolling off slate gray sea.
Staring out beyond the cedar point, feet planted slightly apart on limestone overlook, wishing he couldfollow the circling gulls, sees a land all in his mind beyond the Lorelei mists where pain and death and sorrow never were. Red leather cap flies off ample unshorn golden locks tossing and streaming behind him as he runs, runs along the graveyard slopes of uncounted ancient mollusks, runs along the wet and dirty sands beneath a steel gray sky flecked with stray splashes of still cerulean and darkening cotton puffs sliding behind the layers of stormy stratus, and the rising chill stings his ears and cheeks and numbs his toes and fingers. And the saltbush climbs the barren heights and wind whips through the leafless scrub.
He stops for a moment, stops to stare beyond the point; a dark green schooner, two master, heels far over, nearly beyond the limit, then staggers erect, luffing, then catches the wind, dirty sails spread like eagle's wings, and he shouts for joy.
Hands stuffed down the front of patched too often trousers, his head to the ground again, he tramps along a moss-grown trail to the dusty roadway... god spare the farmer and his loaded wagon making painful journey along this twice-damned set of ruts. Ah, yes, his errand: fills two wooden buckets from the spring and balances the yoke upon his shoulders, still raw from yesterday's half-recalled exertions, and slowly trods the rocky path winding up the limestone slope.
Stooping through the leather curtain door, he sets the heavy buckets on the crudely fashioned counter by the sink, fills his heavy mug and drinks his fill. No one else having come back home, he sets a pot of soup to simmering over the coals, stretches out on his sleeping plank, pulls the rough wool blanket up to his chin, and resting his unwashed head on a small sack of feed, closes his eyes for a hard-earned autumn nap.
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12-25-2010
Mylinda Rives
The character is a loner and is reflecting on the seashore while walking and running along the sand, then the hilly dunes. He is thinking about himself and what he is doing. I like how the Title, "Afternoon Off" ends with a nap.
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12-18-2010
Mae Futter Stein
I feel this is more of a story then a poem. There is no beauty in your words, just darkness and gloom. To me, poetry has rhythem and self-possessed calmness with metrical writings.
You would do well writing stories.
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12-13-2010
Frank Fields
Very interesting, Wayne, with many contrasts. Images, textures, passions, all clamoring for attention. Can I say almost symphonic? I kept wanting the visions to come true--for the character. A skillful hand and mind behind this work. ^^ Regardless, a delightful if ultimately sad, work. Thank you.
Frank :)
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