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01-31-2011
Mae Futter Stein
Hi Alan,
Well, I could see in this picture a corn field in Idaho, where an old man was dying of age, still doing what was natural, as has done year after year, keeping his crop alive. The battle was probably one he should have given up years ago and retired. Makes you stop and think. Good words.....Mae
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01-28-2011
Akshata Shanbhag
So powerful and such attention to detail! The prickling sensation on the back of my neck increased with every line read, the power of nature over us reinforced with every word. A great read, thank you...
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01-28-2011
Mylinda Rives
"The Deed" is an accurate account of the Dust Bowl" era, vegetation and birds suffered from the wind and sun. I like the artwork that depicts a man (sharecropper) watering his field by hand. A lack of irrigation or shortage of water again is depicted and shares your words.
You struggle with nature, and it appears to be a losing battle between you two. Nice job, well done.
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01-26-2011
Walter Jones
To taste the water one must drink the wine, a writer pieces the well, only the smith takes the practice to the new level, a withering of edge, leaves practice kept, trigger left on safety, Walt
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01-26-2011
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This was a very powerful and well written poem! The story told with each stanza built up very, very well. Your descriptions were very vivid, too.
Great work!
~Leigh of the Commenting Community~
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