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The Deed

by Alan Reed (Age: 63)
copyright 01-25-2011


Age Rating: 13 +
The Deed
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The iciness of his smile
seeped like osmosis through the crevices
left on my face by the squint rooted
on fires of a loud and angry sun.

A tempest stormed across the dusty, red sky
following the wake of his Packard of no color.

His eyes with their misted askant look
found us like the rain
and the dark clouds took cover.

Unowned feathers fled the frightened fields
like tumbleweeds amid superior dusts of sleep
wielding easily the pale club of the wind
and swirling the soul of a flower strike.

- an utter-able chill -

Where lurched the deeds of green thrilling light
with thinned new fragile yellows?
Spoiled and stale like the scant and stunted ears of corn
not able to sprinkle the acres
that had fallen into battlefields.

Picket's Charge in woods that stuttered and clapper-clawed
songs that stirred the few scrawny birds that stayed on.

Sharecroppers in the Dust Bowl
walked on loose strands of primitive tightropes.

One could hear the blast across the Great Plains
all the way to Boise City.
Blood oozed from the side of my palate,
decadal fertilizer at long last leaching the dry ground.

As I lay dying -
he reached toward the heavens – swanking the deed
and cackling like a hexed slime eel.




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        01-31-2011     Mae Futter Stein        

Hi Alan,

Well, I could see in this picture a corn field in Idaho, where an old man was dying of age, still doing what was natural, as has done year after year, keeping his crop alive. The battle was probably one he should have given up years ago and retired. Makes you stop and think. Good words.....Mae

        01-28-2011     Akshata Shanbhag        

So powerful and such attention to detail! The prickling sensation on the back of my neck increased with every line read, the power of nature over us reinforced with every word. A great read, thank you...

        01-28-2011     Mylinda Rives        

"The Deed" is an accurate account of the Dust Bowl" era, vegetation and birds suffered from the wind and sun. I like the artwork that depicts a man (sharecropper) watering his field by hand. A lack of irrigation or shortage of water again is depicted and shares your words.
You struggle with nature, and it appears to be a losing battle between you two. Nice job, well done.

        01-26-2011     Walter Jones        

To taste the water one must drink the wine, a writer pieces the well, only the smith takes the practice to the new level, a withering of edge, leaves practice kept, trigger left on safety, Walt

        01-26-2011     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

This was a very powerful and well written poem! The story told with each stanza built up very, very well. Your descriptions were very vivid, too.

Great work!


~Leigh of the Commenting Community~



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