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05-11-2011
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
Things do bring us comfort and this poem does too. I liked your vision of the sunset and the way it makes one happy at the sight. We link good memories to bad ones to make the bad ones hurt less. This is a great poem and your muse(Emily Dickinson) is wonderful also! Thanks for the poem, Anthony
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03-07-2011
Alan Reed
Love the concept of cherishing your sunset, alone, and in your favorite mug: warm and tight. Very well written and adds a unique perspective to the sunset. That it comes when you ask is a mantra for us all as might be the dawn sun. -best always - Alan
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03-01-2011
Susan Brown
Hi Alma,
Emily's verse brought the color, once again, to another shining face. I like your idea of adding a fresh spin to a famous line. Good effort.
Bring me a sunrise in a sparkling crystal tumbler laced with curtains dipped in the whitest salts of the earth.
Sunset, sunrise. Nice to read you today.
Susan
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02-27-2011
Mylinda Rives
I like the lines you write for Emily Dickinson's "Bring Me The Sunset".
The warmth and afterglow after a hectic day has passed is priceless.
I too, literally enjoy thinking about events during day, and down time is quality time for me, so I can be ready for tomorrow.
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