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04-21-2011
Frank Fields
Sometimes the words just come out. Seemingly unconnected, or perhaps with the author being the only one capable of assigning meaning and so on. Regardless, the writer sees them flow, hears their call, and sets them down obeying a higher calling than mundane scholasticism. True artistry, that. Well done. ^^
Frank :)
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04-21-2011
Lyle Berry
This poem has a purity of form and innocence of expression that moves the reader to experience the words, rather than just read and translate into meanings. The words are beyond that. Reminds me of oriental forms, such as the sedoka or the haiku, with an economy of words, but a beauty where less is infinitely more. I experienced your words and it was a wonderful trip.
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04-15-2011
Raja Sharma
The diction fully justifies the title and that is the most striking feature that I noticed first, however, with every passing line, I felt that this poetic dance of the celestail bodies that you have strenously illustrated here is not only praiseworthy but also remarkably unique in stylistic features.
God bless you
Rajasir
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