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Home of the Rising Sons

by Alan Reed (Age: 63)
copyright 05-27-2011


Age Rating: 13 +

Afore twilight winged insects
Come to rest
On a gently rippling creek
Where placid mists acquiesce
And one-horse carriages so sleek
Surrender humanity’s finest
Midnight sons to seek
Their customary blackness
So renowned they are to sneak

Neither humility nor unheard cries
Echo past window displays
Beyond the attendant sunrise
An unsightly game
And it remains the same

All in a daze
For everyone sighs
And closes his eyes
In so many ways
And in so many days
Society dies







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        05-28-2011     Mae Futter Stein        

Love it, Alan...Nice, nice, nice! Now that is good poetry. I enjoyed it very much. That one is a keeper in my book of memories...What else can I say? Mae

        05-28-2011     Raja Sharma        

These lines are still echoing in my mind, brother,

In so many ways
And in so many days
Society dies

What a wonderful picturesque poetic presentation it is! Your words seem to be directly penetrating the mind to rest for a long period in one's memory. The imagery is equally praiseworthy. You possess an art of description, laconic, yet so eloquent and complete.

Wonderul piece!

God bless you
Rajasir



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