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06-28-2011
Mae Futter Stein
The hallelujah is used in expression of praise, joy or thanks. I see the child as it grows giving thanks through life with many voices of love that is adored. Expressions of truth and love applied to the man as he grows, and loved by many. Kind words said about him as he lay dying on the floor. I see him at his resting place where praises of music and many hallelujahs, unto his journey from this world. A story poem with thought. Well done. Mae
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06-21-2011
Susan Brown
Dancing arrives, early the step taps. I ponder the green long enough to feel the soft touch the grass leaves as a soothing reminder of how precious the tune really was. Notes recall the voice's vividly. Joy lives on with a word. Back I go for another read. See if I can count the shadows that stand watching in the distance?
Susan
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06-15-2011
Alan Reed
The writer writes. While images and moist trinkets seep through the pores and trickle upwards from the brow, toward the wrinkles made both of smiles and a sadness, sideways past the temples to finally the nape. Surely this was written as it was read. On its back. And the choir sang.
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06-13-2011
Raja Sharma
Hallelujah!
Words so piously laconically yet so eloquently ssy what volumes can't express.
Great works Sir,
God bless you
Rajasir
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06-13-2011
Frank Fields
Obscure and hidden, seemingly, the true thoughts behind the words. Puts me in mind of "There was the veil through which we could not see...." Half-seen, half-heard, half-understood, the mind struggles to know the meaning when it may be right there, in front of.
Peace, my friend.
Frank :)
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