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stepping steps, walking with you
by
Megan Cox
(Age: 18)
copyright 03-24-2012
  
Age Rating: 7 +
stepping
steps
again
and
again
walking
forever
until one day
i come across
you
.
we
join
hands
and continue
walking
and tired as
i was
before,
with
you,
i want to
walk
forEver
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04-04-2012
phantomwrays
I really thought this was interesting. It was so simply put (which in my opinion is the best) and I thought the words as steps was a fitting touch. Very nice!
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03-26-2012
Susan Brown
Hello Megan,
After my second or third trip by, for another peek, I find myself beginning to engage. I'm attempting to follow the pattern you're weaving upon the walk. Is the path stony? Full of hills and valleys? Where are you headed? Or are you back tracking? That's my next thought/question. Interesting. I hope there's more to come.
Susan
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