stepping steps, walking with you
Age Rating: 7 +
until one day
i come across
and tired as
i want to
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I really thought this was interesting. It was so simply put (which in my opinion is the best) and I thought the words as steps was a fitting touch. Very nice!
After my second or third trip by, for another peek, I find myself beginning to engage. I'm attempting to follow the pattern you're weaving upon the walk. Is the path stony? Full of hills and valleys? Where are you headed? Or are you back tracking? That's my next thought/question. Interesting. I hope there's more to come.