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02-15-2013
Rachel Brown
Young love
feel inferior to
the wind as it moves through the air.
Alan this Haiku is quite the master piece.
I too write Haiku and it is quite the honor to
have read yours.
I know Haiku isn't the easiest form of poetry
out there but in the end its very rewarding to write such wonderful pieces of work.
Keep up the great work!!!!
Keep Smiling and Keep Writing too ^_^.
-Rachel ^_*
Hope you had a very happy Valentines Day *_^
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03-26-2012
Susan Brown
Hi Alan,
wind
flower
red the cup-shaped
heart of the young
matter
green the sea!
Enjoyed your haiku,
Very nice,
Susan
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