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Swimming Laps

by Ken W. Simpson (Age: 80)
copyright 07-05-2012


Age Rating: 16 +

Flickering moments

of a tram ride

echoing voices

showers

and blue water.

 

The smell of chlorine

while floating

as admiring teachers

watched

and talked.

 

Self-consciously

I spluttered upright

as if defeated

a memory

soon forgotten.

 

The sand

scuffed and blotched

with detritus

dried seaweed

shells and jellyfish.

 

Curling wavelets

sliding slowly

back and forth

towards the shallows

alive with tiny darting fish.

 

Translucent green blobs

and lacy filaments

delicately pale

hovered over

the sculpted sand.

 

Jumping to avoid

the breaking waves

flinching

at the shock

before plunging under.

 

One Saturday

Minh drove me

Kha-Nhu

and Thuan-Nhu

to the Glen Waverley Pool.

 

There was the same

pervasive

smell of chlorine

I remembered

so well.

 

The waves

were artificial

and the water

the same

synthetic blue.

 

Minh took

Kha-Nhu

and Thuan-Nhu

as I went

to the change-room.

 

Self-conscious

amidst the nudity

I undressed at a bench

with a hook

to hang my clothes.

 

I opened a heavy door

and sat on a bench

in the cloying

heat and humidity

of the steam-room.

 

The men above

lounged indolently

like emperors

sometimes stretching

creakily.

 

An Asian lady

entered unobtrusively

and sat nearby

just below

a bulging stomach.

 

In the silent swelter

an old man shuffled in

and sat

grim as sin

rearranging his neck.

 

Drained

as droplets odf sweat

slid down my nose

and chest

I rose and left.

 

After showering

I climbed down

to the spa

and sat

on a curving bench.

 

Jets of air

caused the water

to erupt

into pale-blue bubbles

flecked with silver.

 

The 'stomach'

and 'grim as sin'

clambered down

and sat silently

nearby.

 

Anonymous faces

and flabby bodies

sat together

like porpoises

or basking whales.

 

Around and inside

the pool

raucous adolescents

their bodies gleaming

gyrated and splashed.

 

Young attendants

at either end

looking bored

patrolled

covertly watching.

 

Little kids

with snorkels

dived

surfaced

and created waves.

 

I enviously watched

impressive hunks

churning

through the water

in adjacent lanes.

 

I climbed down

easing myself

into the water

ducking under a rope

into the adjoining lane.

 

Despite the traffic

I began

swimming laps

laboriously

on my back.

 

Nine year old

Kha-Nhu swam

three laps

to Minh's two

and to my one.

 

Navigating blindly

I became aware

of an Asian lady

who should have swam

in a faster lane.

 

She was moving

rapidly

and determinedly

towards me

like a kamikaze.

 

Attempting

to save myself

from being torpedoed

I began kicking

furiously.

 

With goggles

rising and falling

she surged closer

perhaps sensing danger

or a broken nose.

 

Abruptly

she changed course

veered away

under the ropes

and disappeared.

 

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