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Our First Date (Tri-fall)

by Adam David Mckim (Age: 28)
copyright 08-19-2012


Age Rating: 16 +

The silence around us
as we see
the stars shooting across the skies...
From this beautiful grus
above me
the stars reflect into your eyes

The moonlight shines on you
in this night
bringing out your amazing smile...
And when the morning dew
comes in sight
our night together was worthwhile

This night was our first date
only us
I'll never forget holding you...
And as we accept fate
with a buss
the start of new love as sparks flew 





Tri-fall Style

The rhyme scheme is abc-abc

The meter is 6/3/8-6/3/8.







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