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Flirtations

by betterthingstocome
copyright 10-13-2013


Age Rating: 18 +

Tongue out  FLIRTATIONS  Tongue out

 

It starts with a little flirtation
Welcoming thoughts of sweet donation
Hearts skipping beats causing vibration
Minds racing full of temptation
 
Welcoming thoughts of sweet donation
Light touching endured causes stimulation
Minds racing full of temptation
While lost in moments of severe aberration
 
Light touching endured causes stimulation
Be careful not to be consumed by predation
While lost in moments of severe aberration
Gracefully portrayed through misting manipulation
 
Be careful not to be consumed by predation
Being deceived by images of deceitful illusion
Gracefully portrayed through misting manipulation
Leading to sadness and frustration

Being deceived by images of deceitful illusion
Believing perceived truthful ideation
Leading to sadness and frustration
A lesson of unexpected education
 
Believing perceived truthful ideation
Hearts skipping beats causing vibration
A lesson of unexpected education
It all starts with a little flirtation
 
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I wrote this and shared on a local craigslist posting October 2013. I thought what a place to put a writing like this. HAHA in the personals under strickly platonic. Yes indeed. Some got a chuckle and others thought it was a way to "get accointed, meet up, hook up and shack up" lol. None-the-less I had a ball writing it and reading the replies when I shared it there.






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        02-09-2014     Mike Farr        

Hello Betterthingstocome,

Flirtation,

It indeed has been a long stretch, as we try generously to dispense our limited time among all the great writers on P-n-P.

Good to be back - Good to see you back,

I must say, I have never seen so many (tions) in a row in my whole life, Mr. Webster would be proud of you my friend, as you have used up his entire inventory of words carrying the (tion) suffix. Beautiful, that in itself is masterful art work, and when you added such a nifty message into the blend, it became a top Blue Ribbon winner. God Bless.




        11-30-2013     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

This is a cute little poem. I felt a little overwhelmed by all the "tion"s but a good read with a nice message. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving! Good job, Anthony

        11-17-2013     Frank Fields        

A depth here that belies the bantering tone and the "flirtatious" aspect. Beware the flirt, for at that point in time, on that day, that second, etc., the flirt may take on a more serious meaning. As you so very well portray. Nicely written, nicely done, and nicely presented. Thank you for the sharing. ^^

Frank :)

        10-20-2013     phoenix        

Indeed things do start from a little flirting I was in a really good relationship that started from harmless flirting. But I ended up falling in love with my high school crush and being in one of the best relationships iv ever been on as well as giving birth to the poetry I know write today.



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