Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID

password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Robert Betts
Megan Quinn
2 Writers

Tyrania Miller
Samantha H.
Tugce Vardar
Basak S.
Natalie Horton
5 Free Members

7 Members
15 Guests

Smokey the Cat (not the bear)
by Beverley McInnis
copyright 12-11-2001


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
My family and friends are always laughing over my memories. I remember everything, even from very early childhood. I might not recall picture images but I'll recall smells, emotions and sounds. I also remember stories told to me when I was young and incorporated them into my memory bank of experiences.

While I recall many things from the time I could walk, my most vivid first memory is that of my cat Smokey.

I was 4 years old when we moved to a 5 acres farm in the country-side of Surrey, BC. Now it is all under pavement and homes but then, it was farms for as far as your eye could see.

Once we settled onto the farm, I was allowed a barn cat to control the mice. Smokey was that barn cat. A tough scrapper who roamed the bushes and neighbouring farms and always came home for fresh milk from the cow.

Smokey wasn't the type of cat that one could sit and cuddle. He was a Tom Cat, a Barn Cat, a scrapper. Still, he allowed me to pat his back while he drank fresh milk from our cow Bessie.

One day Smokey didn't return for the milk. I remember feeling really scared, wondering where my friend had gone. My dad told me not to worry, he'd come home once he was done wandering around. He did around one week later. He was scratched up, looked very ragged and was meowing all the way up to the barn. Dad gave him a bowl of fresh milk and some food scraps. After he satisfied his hunger, he curled up and slept. I believe he slept an entire day and night!

Smokey stayed closer to home after that incident. He also seemed to be more affectionate, allowing me to pat him without the milk bowl in front of him.

One day Smokey didn't come home. I was 5 years old. I don't really recall my parents telling me he had been hit by a car but I do recall informing them when the funeral was to be held.

After all, Smokey was a member of the family and as such, should have a proper funeral.

My dad gained permission from the neighbour to bury Smokey in the bush - where he loved to roam. Before he went to work, Dad made a special spot for Smokey to rest.

I invited all the neighbourhood children to the funeral. With my mother, we walked to the back bush and laid Smokey to rest. I had a cross made out of twigs that I put at the head of the grave. I said a few simple words and we all said the Lord's Prayer.

After, we walked back to my home where my mum had put out cookies and kool-aid for us - we had a wake. We stood around and talked about what a good cat Smokey was.

Shortly after, I returned back to kindergarten class. In front of the entire class, I told about Smokey and the funeral. I asked if anyone had another cat as Smokey wouldn't want me to be sad forever. He'd want me to have another cat to keep me happy.

Someone did. This is where my memory goes away as I cannot recall what the kitten's name was.

Memories are funny things. Allowing you to recall bits'n'pieces of your past without the full wide-screen details.

Still, I'll never forget the first funeral I ever attended nor will I forget Smokey. He taught me much more than he'll ever know.

(c) 2001, Beverley McInnis


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Stories


Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

12-30-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Terry, isn't it funny to remember stuff from childhood! John, you cracked me up! I'm sure that was his reason...he was an "active" Tom Cat. ~laughing~

Thanks! Glad you all enjoyed the story!


12-28-2001 John Mcleod    

This was great Bev, a lovely tale from the past. I think Smokey had a wild woman somewhere, that's why he was knackered and slept for a day and night.


A great write my friend,


John


12-15-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Robert, thank you for your comment. I laughed over your story on how you'd squirt milk into the cat's mouths and they'd follow! That was the funniest part of milking....was trying to hit the cats all in the mouth! Dripping milk, it was too cute, especially the kittens. I'll have to really think this over about the children's book and play around with it.


12-12-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Thank you Sunny! I think most anyone who had a milk cow, called the milk cow Bessie. **grin** Such a popular name. Glad you enjoyed the story.


12-12-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Thank you Nan. Your comment got my brain rolling...I think it might make a nice children's story. Might have to work on that after Christmas. =o)


12-11-2001 Nan Jacobs    

I am sitting here seeing this turn into a short story, Bev..... either from Smokey's point of view or the little girl's (that's you, fictionalized... lol)
~~Nan


12-11-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Thank you Betty. Sachi sounds like the coolest cat!


12-11-2001 Betty Eskdale    

I have almost always had a cat...and each was very special. I still have trouble writing about them though. Sachi was a darling, I wrote about her, she was a retriever tabby, funny and cute she could make any dog person like her. Nice tribute to Smokey!


12-11-2001 Beverley McInnis    

Thank you Jackie. Mum said that I buried every animal on the farm - frogs, birds, baby rabbits, didn't matter. Smokey was a good cat, the best mouser ever!


12-11-2001 Jackie Moranty    

Great write, Bev. Sounds like you were organized even as a child. I'm sure that Smokey appreciated you as much as you appreciated him. Jackie


Visitor Reads: 490
Total Reads: 648
Comments: 10

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:





Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats