07-11-2003 Jenny Stein
i know exasctly what you mean...but i just need to get out in that writing world. i need to make a book. wonderful poem. its not realky like any one i have read on here before.
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01-07-2002 Denny Sisson
Thank you Betty. If it were not for you and so many more like you my computer would be just another typewriter. No one would know that I even tried. Excellent reading
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01-05-2002 Susan E. Eskdale
The balance of the words a writer uses and the words that are meant can cause some interesting results. Thanks for confirming there is no true definition of a writer.
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12-27-2001 John Mcleod
True Betty, who knows? I bet most of us have read a book and thought, "I can do better than that"
I have! lol, I guess that there are so many of us out there that there is so many to choose from, one day some of us will be at the right place at the right time.
Keep writing and wait for that time!
A good write by the way,
John
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12-18-2001 M.E. (Bunny) Eastveld
Back to the poetic realm again, oh versatile one!!This was really quite good..not that I'd know, not being a judge, critic or suchlike (although as you know...everyone's a critic..even if it's just about themselves) Love, Little Sis
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12-17-2001 Betty Eskdale
Thank you all! It is wonderful to have such nice comments from all of you. Your work inspires me.
BTW Robert, I entered a lyric contest too, I was broken hearted when I learned Kim Carnes won; I didn't realize we were competing against professionals. I didn't get any comments from any judges, not too helpful at all.
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12-17-2001 Paulette Weaver
how true !
PW
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12-17-2001 Maralee Gerke
I enjoyed this poem Betty. You do a good job with the rhyming.
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12-17-2001 Maralee Gerke
I enjoyed this poem Betty. You do a good job with the rhyming.
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12-17-2001 Beverley McInnis
I agree Betty, nicely spoken in verse....perhaps this will spur people on to read and comment on other stories and poems, along with sharing their own.
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12-16-2001 Jackie Moranty
Very nicely said and very nicely done, too, Betty. Hopefully, this poem will encourage others to read and comment on more works. Good job. Jackie
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