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That's It, It's Over, You're Gone
by Betty Eskdale (Age: 63)
copyright 01-02-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
This was written for a lounge singer who asked me to write him a poem, that's why it says "found another guy"
You know, as a writer, you may end up writing about things you haven't experienced but want to write about, or you may want to tell someone else's story.



Would have been nice if you'd at least said "goodbye"
Even though I could sense the fires die
It's still a shock to realize you've found another guy
That's it, it's over, you're gone

There's no way that anyone will see me cry
I won't bother calling to find out why
Don't change your mind, it's too late to try
That's it, it's over, you're gone


That's it, it's over, you're gone
I'm not gonna die, I'll just carry on
I'm not the type who needs someone to lean upon
That's it, it's over, you're gone


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01-27-2002 Betty Eskdale    

Thanks for the great comments!
Really appreciate you all reading, thanks again. David, upsticks...is that lacrosse?
01-06-2002 Paulette Weaver    

Yes, I was also wondering as you mentioned
another 'guy'. No matter, great write.
Paulette
01-05-2002 Susan E. Eskdale    

This could be a really good country music song....
01-05-2002 Betty Eskdale    

If only it were that easy, eh?
01-04-2002 John Mcleod    

Perhaps the other readers missed the bit where you said "found another guy", it does not really matter though what gender was that was involved,
the meaning is still the same, however with this bit of knowledge it puts a different angle on things.

A good write my friend.


John
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