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La De Da
by Paulette Weaver
copyright 01-03-2002


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Silence so loud ears covered, muzzling
screams of what stopped in places
so long ago, never to pick up
again.

Bones rubbed wrong for so many years,
the cushion of forgiveness and
empathy worn away forgetting
where it used to belong.

Speak long-distance even up-close
feign a smile, reverberating
pretense, marking its over-
glossed cadence.

Holiday and birthday cards not bought,
dusty words, empty pens no longer
writing of requited love.

Strength's finale, as faded glory days
whisper what's too late to catch,
as last night's vespers answers
to moving on.


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01-04-2002 Paulette Weaver    

Hi John,
This is just a fictional poem about two people, after many unhappy years of being together, found the will to say goodbye. Thanks for your interpretation, it was a very good analogy.
Paulette
01-04-2002 John Mcleod    

Now I may be wrong here Paulette as sometimes I am not that good at reading inside a poem but I feel that we are talking about someone who has departed? I get the impression that during that persons life things were not so good in the sense that arguments brought the relationship to and end, then the person dies which plays on the mind then one is thinking I never said goodbye?
Or maybe not a death but a seperation of some sort? Or then again my dog did go walkabout for a few weeks and I never said goodbye to him, LOL. Only jesting Paulette.


A good interesting write anyway.


John
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