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You Touched My Heart
by Marilyn Mackenzie (Age: 56)
copyright 01-19-2002


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
You touched my heart so quietly,
You never said you would.
Our hearts embraced so silently,
I didn’t know they could.

Voice on the phone you are to me,
So happy, strong, sincere.
Computer notes from me and thee.
Becoming more? Do I fear?

What happens when we one day meet?
Will I be what you thought?
The Lord above knows whom I seek.
Are you the one I’ve sought?

How long before we’ll know for sure?
Will it take only a glance?
Desiring love forever more,
Can you, God and I dance?

For that’s the test, you know, my dear
Of whether it can be.
With God as head I’ll never fear,
We’ll dance till eternity.





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03-14-2007 Leigh G.    

Arg! I am a idiot...I need sleep if I gave you four stars by accident! Sorry, I meant five...XD


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03-14-2007 Leigh G.    

*whistle* What a beautiful poem! It reads like a song with superior flow, arrangement, and choice of words! It's a very peaceful and happy ballad...although things lasting forever is nothing more than a fantasy in my life, it's still nice sometimes to think there are some things that last forever. Love is fickle though...friendship is far more stable, because it's one of the things don't fade away so easily...it changes as the people do, and it's not so hard to control like love. Anyway, great flow and no errors to be seen! I'd read your other works, but it's 11:23 PM and I must shower before morning! Ahhhh...homeschooling rocks, I did all tomorrow's work today so I get tomorrow off...and I get to sleep waaaaaaaaaay in...Ahhh, cheers to homeschooling! Forgive my rambling! Great work, keep writing!


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04-14-2003 Pepper Basham    

Very nice, Marilyn. I hope you find the one for you! :)


03-09-2003 Janet Owenby    

Extremely Beautiful!


03-07-2002 Celeste Wilson    

Beautiful!!!


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