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Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
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The Love We Thought We Knew
by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38)
copyright 01-20-2002


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Graceful fingers of heartache
Wrap tender around my neck
His gentle touch grows stronger
Love washes up a wreck
No more drifting fantasies
Floating hope on romance
No more bobbing dreams
Left to sink & drown by chance

Choke on reality
Cough on the truth
Suffocating life
kills the love we thought we knew

Join the lies, six feet under
As my crimson blood turns cold
Because nothing lasts forever
Even illusions grow old
Passion's rigor mortis
The inevitable end
Deceptive moments only break
When life's not willing to bend

Choke on reality
Cough on the truth
Suffocating life
kills the love we thought we knew


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06-18-2006 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Yes, Aunt BJ, this could be taken two ways... one, that a lover simply killed the love and the "victim" is left with a dead shell of a heart... or, two, that the lover could actually take the life of someone that trusted and loved them so much. You are VERY observant! :-)



06-18-2006 BJ Niktabe    

This is quite chilling and intense! Scary thought that someone you think you love could be capable of something like this! Very good write!! Thanks :)


11-01-2004 Chelsea Armstrong    

So full of saddness. So much hurt and pain. Mary, this does not seem like you. None the less it is a wonderful write..amazing.


01-20-2002 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

CLB: Sad life, but glad to be back and see you too! Luv you hun...


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