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Forgotten People
by John Mcleod
copyright 02-02-2002


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 



Forgotten faces lost in places
ones we never see
people that we used to know
some from our family tree,

Old folk's home or home for the old
a place where they can’t stray
sitting waiting anticipating
the visitor that will not come today,

Huddled in groups like weary troops
they wonder what they have done
to be left for so long just wandering on
searching for the truth,

Sitting in day rooms not quite play rooms
I don’t think they like it much
it is not the same as being at home
where there is that personal touch,

No one should be forgotten
just because they have aged
it could happen to you
then what would you do?

Nothing for it would be too late.






John Mcleod








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03-07-2002 Melissa Rives    

Definitely thoughts to ponder....very well said.


03-03-2002 Nan Jacobs    

Hubby's granny (88) lives with us. She's still not happy, tho. It's simply not *her* home. This really strikes a chord.


02-23-2002 Sharron Tyrrell    

Oh dear and each year we get closer and closer .. that is why I hang out with the elementary kids :) .. gotta stay young ...


02-23-2002 Marilyn Mackenzie    

This does bring back memories of visiting my grandmother in a nursing home. She had 2 of her kids and 6 grandkids nearby and we all took turns visiting her, even when we weren't sure she recognized any of us. But the lady in the bed next to her had been in the home for 20 years without visitors. We made sure we visited with her too, but it was sad that her family just ignored her. Perhaps they thought that because she had gone blind and lost most of her hearing that her mind didn't work as well. They were wrong. She still loved them, too, and told us all about her family that was too busy to visit.


02-05-2002 Tiffany Lindsay    

I enjoyed this piece. It reminds me of going to with my grandma when I was little to visit her dad in a nursing home. I enjoyed those visits, but only remember them vaguely because he died when I was about six. She visited him every day.


02-04-2002 Barbara Robinson    

Really love this one, and it is so true. Mom always said she didn't want to end up in an old folk's home, that she'd rather be dead, and she made all of her three girls promise that she would never end up in one. She didn't. She lived at home until her early death at age 67, but she got her wish because when she could go no more, she passed on instead of being put into an old folk's home and that is what she wanted, just the way she wanted it to be. Blessings, Barbara


02-03-2002 Jackie Moranty    

John, It seems like it happens so often, when people become hard to care for, they get thrown away. We forget that not only will we be there too, but after living through everything that they have, they have more to offer than we'll ever know. Again, you've hit the core of the subject. Jackie


02-03-2002 John Mcleod    

Yes Bev, it is sad and oh so true.
Bob, what can I say, thankyou so much, normally the true ones get the message accross better than the made up ones. Your nice comment made my miserable life a bit happier today. *lol*

John


02-03-2002 Beverley McInnis    

Well written John. That's why I took my Brownie troop into the senior's centre - and they loved it! The seniors and the children, it was terrific fun each time we went.

Funny, they are the ones who give us our future and we reward this by forgetting they exist. Sad eh.


02-02-2002 Bob Church    

John, of all the good stuff I've read that you've written, I think I like this the best. Well done, and so true. Bless you...


02-02-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

well written piece and so true makes one think.


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