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This is a very good poem! I used to be so picky when I first started reading and writing poetry about only reading dark poems, but I suppose about a year ago I started appreciating non-dark poems more. This tells a simple and story story, and I enjoyed that. Poems with no crescendo bother me, because you never really know what's about even if the flow and choice of words is good. Religion is about peace and becoming a better person, that's a big reason I like this poem so much. In this day and age, with all the trouble in Iraq, it seems all these religions are all clashing and causing more problems than good. I don't know much about the religions over there, only what my closest friend has told me, but that's just the way it seems. My opinion is also influenced by years of Christian Bible classes, which always teach to love your enemies and to be peaceful. Also, in modern life, it's been embedded into my brain to solve conflicts by words...not weapons. No spelling or grammar errors I could spot, although you choice of words in this one isn't as memorable as in your other pieces. That's my only complaint, and I'm a picky bugger! :) Now that I've read all your poems, I hope you submit more! Is it just me, or is my comment bigger than all eight other comments put together? O.O Oh, as a random though, can I all you Marilyn? I always ash if I can call those older than me by their first names. Great work, keep it coming!
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