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valentine challenge
by Betty Eskdale (Age: 63)
copyright 02-10-2002


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
If I am not too late, I would like to play too!


Vessel of Love
Adonis, Divine
Let me, Sweet Dove, be
Eternally thine;
Nuzzling, nearness,
Touching, entwined
Inseparable lovers
Never loving another
Enjoined for all time.




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02-11-2002 Kay Lee Kelly    

AWWW, this is great, I wish I wrote that.
02-11-2002 Michelle (Mikita) Gruendel    

Awesome Alliteration, the thought that lovers would never stray to love another is beautiful. This is what Valentines is all about!
02-11-2002 Maralee Gerke    

This is a winner as far I am concerned.
02-11-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

Bravo it is very good. Peggy
02-11-2002 Nan Jacobs    

Betty, I love this, it's just plain ROMANTIC, all caps! :-)
~~nan
02-11-2002 Beverley McInnis    

Betty, romantic sensual poem. The last three lines are very interesting.
"Inseparable lovers
Never loving another
Enjoined for all time."

Lovers that cannot be separated, yet are not loving each other and enjoined...interesting image my mind is coming up with. =o)





02-10-2002 Betty Eskdale    

I hope you have all the chocolate your little heart desires, Robert, you deserve it!
02-10-2002 Betty Eskdale    

Actually, Bubba, you kind of inspired this with all your hifalutin chat today....thanks for the inspiration!
02-10-2002 Betty Eskdale    

It's watching the Olympics that inspired me Jackie, I hope you find someone more like the Rifleman (remember Chuck Connors, how could anyone ever forget him?) to help you here and there.....
02-10-2002 Jackie Moranty    

Great write, Betty. I only wish Adonis would show up. Maybe he'd help me calve. Jackie
02-10-2002 Bob Church    

I wish I was capable of something like this... Very nice, Betty... Well done.
02-10-2002 Betty Eskdale    

Thanks, really glad you like it!
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