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Sickness
by Eric Carrillo (Age: 28)
copyright 02-24-2002


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
tired and worn-out
I can not sleep,
what the cause is, I do not know.
Doctors, I do not like,
I ache, doctors know not why.
My strength, it seems to leave me.
Doctor knows not the cause.
Just one more blood test...
No, I, won't, I will not, I do not want to return!


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06-12-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Been there done that and got the scars to prove it, Anthony
10-19-2003 Janet Owenby    

Yeah neither do I , they charge me 105.00 dollars to tell me I need a referral to another doctor, because they are not qualified. A lot of money for that one sentence, wish my writing paid like that. Hope you feel better soon Eric.
10-15-2003 Emily Garwood    

ugh doctors just make me shiver :S good poem though!
09-21-2002 Cristina Lipp    

I know the feeling, Eric. I keep getting a recurring cold or virus and have to keep going to the doctor. I finally refused to return also.
04-07-2002 Melissa Rives    

How frustrating it can be!
04-04-2002 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I know the feeling. They seem like leeches, don't they? How the heck have you been? Better, I hope!
03-04-2002 Amber McCabe    

Hey Eric!

This is a great poem, I enjoy the honesty as well as the emotion this comes across with. Very good job!
02-25-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

I agree with kay. Good write.
02-24-2002 Kay Lee Kelly    

Oh boy, can I relate to this one.
Glad you are back!
02-24-2002 Victor Buhagiar    

Very impressive. Well written and would be perfect if some repetions are avoided.
02-24-2002 Bob Church    

Outward pain can yield insight into our inner projections. Can you share those with us? Sometimes it helps... I wish you well.
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