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Marigolds In Winter
by Nancy Pawley
copyright 02-25-2002
Contest Winner


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
The old wooden bridge, weathered with many years of use, creaked underneath his slight weight. It had been their place, ever since the first time they had met. Her parents had bought the farm two miles down the road from where he lived, back in the summer of 1908.

He remembered every last detail of their first meeting, and he smiled within himself. She was all of 10, and himself almost a man at 12. Her pigtailed hair was redder than colorfast Georgia clay after a hard spring rain. Her skin was fair, but spritzed with a generous amount of freckles, reminding him of the cinnamon specks in his mama's apple pies that had won blue ribbons each year at the county fair. The very thought made his mouth water and his stomach grumble. He had run out of the house at daybreak, before his mama had finished fixing breakfast.

The marigolds sprang riotous along the river's edge in various shades of yellowgold, crimsoned red, and marmalade orange. The Flint River ran slow and lazy, as was its custom in the summer months, unless a heavy afternoon shower decided to make its presence known. He had brought his cane pole and a box of worms for bait, but the catfish and bream weren't in a mood to bite, so he had taken to skimming stones.

She didn't mince words, " I bet I can skip a stone just as good as you,
if not better! "

" Think not, " he retorted.

She picked up a smooth rock, flat enough so that it would skip at least five times, maybe more. She flicked her wrist and it went sailing..1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6..seven times it skimmed the water's surface, then sank to join it's brother stones on the rocky bottom.

His turn came and he selected a sure winner. With practiced precision he let it go. It clunked against a boulder in midstream, then made a swandive into the gently swirling liquid. She quickly commented, " That only counts as one skip to my way of thinking! "

Being bested by a skinny girl, young enough to be his sister was not on any kind of agenda he had set for himself. He picked up his belongings, and began to walk away. What she said next stopped him in his tracks. " You shoulda asked me what the loser wins. " She held up a brown paper bag in front of his nose. Sweet smells of ham and biscuits, and fresh peach cobbler hit him like a ton of bricks. They sat underneath the full-leaved weeping willow tree, eating their first meal together. From that moment on they were inseparable. They spent the summers swimming, fishing, and walking..talking and dreaming.

The years came and went with hurried haste. Early one autumn eve in 1914, he brought her a small bouquet of her favorite flowers, the last of the marigolds he had found by the riverbank. On bended knee in her parents' parlor, he took her hand in his. " Please do me the honor of becoming my wife. " He had reached the age of 18, and war was rampant in Europe. Newspapers and radio talked of nothing else. " I went and signed on as a medic in the army. My train leaves for Charleston in 1 week. "

They were married on Saturday night, with good friends and many relatives present. The reception was fine and dandy and dried marigolds graced the tables. Everyone had brought potluck. Smoked hams, fried chicken, potato salad, boiled corn, green beans, squash, apple and pumpkin pies, cocoanut and pecan cakes, iced tea and coffee. It was a wonderful wedding meal and they danced to fiddles, banjos, and guitars.

They spent their honeymoon night in his bedroom. His mother had gussied up things, adding a feminine touch. They went to the community church on Sunday, the only service they would attend as husband and wife. They had four blissful days together. Their parting was filled with tenderness, sweet kisses, and sorrowful goodbyes. He never saw her alive again. While he fought valiantly for his country, saving many lives in the process, she died of the deadly influenza outbreak which swept south from the Canadian Border to the Gulf Of Mexico.

He walked across the bridge to the small country church, while spiraling flakes of snow were uplifted by the blowing winter winds. He brushed away the leaves that had gathered around her headstone. The marigolds that were placed in the blue-white vase had long since faded, but he knew his offering should please her spirit.

He had come out each and everyday in the bright summer months, bringing with him his artist's sketchbook, and oils with which to paint. Marigolds had come to life beneath his fingers, and the sun would always shine for her. " My Love, I've brought a bit of summertime to warm you, though it won't be long until this world is snowbound in sugar-coated confection. " He removed his wedding ring and his Medal Of Honor, positioning them on the crucifix atop her gravestone, then carefully propped the gilt-framed picture next to her name, Mary Gold.


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01-11-2008 BJ Niktabe    

What a sweet and touching story. So sad that she died before he returned. I love the colors that you've added to each paragraph. Your imagery has come to life. This has instantly become one of my favorites! Thank you!


01-08-2008 Richard Reed Jr    

Rarely does a wrote move my heart as this one has done. This one brought tears streaming from my eyes. How tragic and yet at least they both
had a taste of the sweetest of loves.

Thank You for writing this. I'll be back to read many times again.
It certainly deserved to win the award -hands down.

~Rich


08-27-2002 Aaron Schmookler    

I agree with the other folks. This is a beautiful story. I found " You shoulda asked me what the loser wins. " a particularly compelling and unique touch. It was also a nice variaiton on the typical tale of couples separated by death in times of war.

I like.



03-17-2002 Eric Carrillo    

Hi, that' was a good story. Thanks for sharing.


03-08-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

Nancy,
Im still wiping my eyes you are a good story teller and writer. Your stories always have a Special touch.


03-07-2002 Celeste Wilson    

Hi Nancy, I finally made it over here. Congrats to you! Enjoy reading your writing.


03-05-2002 Nan Jacobs    

Add a "congrats!!" and well met, to the comment below. :-)
~~nan


03-04-2002 Esther Spurrill    

I especially liked her name...


03-03-2002 Eileen Waldron    

Nancy this is a magnificent piece, with a surprise twist of the woman dying and not the soldier. Loved the language. Congrats...well deserved!


03-02-2002 John Mcleod    

Congratulations Nancy, this lovely tale did deserve to win, it was written in such a manner that it forced the reader to want more of it.

John


03-02-2002 Nancy Pawley    

I want to thank all of you who have congratulated me..it was a wonderful and unexpected surprise..all of you have made me feel like a member of a large and loving family, appreciated for just being me.
Once again, thanks,
Nancy


03-01-2002 Kay Lee Kelly    

Congratulations !!! I loved reading this, it is
great, I am so glad it won.


02-26-2002 Molly Martin    

one of my favorites of your work
........;0)


02-25-2002 Nan Jacobs    

I guess that should be, "welcome *back* to PnP". :)


02-25-2002 Nan Jacobs    

A tender story, touches the heart. welcome to Pnp
~~nan


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