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Remnants of Immortality
by Robert JudeAce
copyright 03-06-2002


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
You came into the world with a dream
Passed on from other lifetimes…
Searching for a way
To correct all the mistakes
That filtered through your lives:
(Those leaden weights on your soul)…
You walk into your garden
Decorated with astonishing flora,
Brilliant colors and breathtaking fragrance…
You fix your eyes on winded water
Cascading down from a statue of Fortuna
And from within the flowing droplets,
A soothing voice reminds you
To peek beyond your senses…
A montage of images and memories
Overflow from your mind-
Historic events, voices of loved ones,
Oceans and canyons,
Wars, death and babies born,
Laughter, horrifying screams,
Royalty and slaves,
Governments, space travel,
Egyptian pyramids-
So much streaming by you
You almost feel as though your head is spinning
But suspended in time…
And from this moment of lucid lunacy
You steer your spirit
From the continuum of reliving over and over
Forever becoming immortal
As you glimpse the invisible kingdom…


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08-05-2003 Dawn Staple    

Have just found this by a lucky random chance, or maybe it was one of those moments of lucid lunacy which steered my spirit from the continuum of reliving over and over. Whatever it was, it was a most pleasurable journey. DAWN in UK
03-08-2002 Nancy Pawley    

Oh boy..this definitely sums up a vast moment in time, giving all of us a peek into your mind. Fantastic!
Nancy
03-06-2002 Kay Lee Kelly    

May you become immortal , your writing should
cover this.
03-06-2002 Peggy Bertrand    

Great write. lots of images.
03-06-2002 Melissa Rives    

I really love your glimpses into the invisible kingdom...write on! Flawless!
03-06-2002 Eileen Waldron    

A cosmic feast...a celestial rebirth...as only judestar can write it.
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